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PostSubject: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Wed Sep 15, 2010 2:11 am

Ch. 1:Aboard The Black Pearl/Marooned

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PostSubject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:45 pm

God Sister? o.o Wait what?

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PostSubject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:19 am

Fail

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PostSubject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:59 am

First off, One,

I'd never let a person like you into my Mansion.

2. I'm not your God-Sister.

3. Hector hates you, I hate you, everyone hates you.


You're a horrible writer.

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PostSubject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:06 am

u forgot one Dest!

4. Your copying everyone who wrote pirate storys' ideas by writing another story based on family.

Geez. Make up your own, original story once in a while.

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PostSubject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Sat Sep 25, 2010 5:13 am

Sorry, but that was pretty bad. I mean the writing, not the story idea, since I don't the family you come from.
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PostSubject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull   Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:27 pm

You could at least give this kid a damn break, he's only what? 13?
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