KingLaurent V.I.P
Posts : 1639 Join date : 2010-03-23 Age : 26 Location : Windy City
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| Subject: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Wed Sep 15, 2010 2:11 am | |
| Ch. 1:Aboard The Black Pearl/Marooned - Spoiler:
As Some Of you May Know, I'm Lance Firedrake aka The Menace To Some Of my Family Members Like my Uncle Hector, Well Here's How It all Began. It Started Off When I lived in my God sister Destiny's Governor's Mansion. I Was Drunk,A wreak and eventually she kicked me out. I Went Back And Forth Crashing My Sister's Place,My Brother's,My Aunt's,Etc. Finally My Father Zachary Toid Sr. Told Me It Was Time For Me To Get a Life,And Stop Bugging The Rest Of The Family's. I Took Up His Offer and went aboard My Godfather Jack Sparrow's Ship,The Black Pearl. By That Time I Became Cabin Boy. My Uncle Hector Came Aboard One Day And Mutinied,Marooning My Godfather Jack and Mr.Gibbs on Tortuga. My Uncle Allowed Me To Be Aboard,For a While As I Learned My Family's Legacy as Pirates. Eventually I Learned how to Fix The Ship,Man The Cannon,Swap The Deck,And Even Pillage Other Ships. But I Did Not Know What Was Coming Ahead Of Me.
For A While I Was Being Good And Staying Out Of my Uncle's Way Til He Told Me We Were Going Somewhere. "Uncle Hector! Where Are We Going? Are We There Yet?!!" I Would Constantly Bother Him With That Question. Finally,One Day He Had Enough. We Had Docked On Cuba. "We're Here?" I Asked Him. Only Thing I Remember After That Was Uncle Hector Taking Out The Docking Board And Raising The Anchor. Then He Looked At His Crew And Said, "WE FINALLY GOT RID OF HIM! DRINKS ON ME WHEN WE GET TO TORTUGA! HURRAY!!!". The Crew Shouted And Cheered For Joy And Headed Off Leaving Me Behind.. I Was Marooned,Then I Turned around and thought 'At Least im In Cuba. Its Were I was Hoping To Go For. Later I Went To Aunt Tia Dalma's House To Probably See If She Can Give Me Some Shelter While I Was Marooned. "You Crazy Boy? Theres A Reason Hector Marooned you Here!" ,She Told Me,"You're Sleeping With The Alligators.". "No Auntie Tia I Beg You! Ill Do Anything!",I Said. "Like What?You Already Burned Down My Other House.",She Said Grunting as she was leaving the room. "Ill Work For You!",I said as she stopped and look at me."Hmm Maybe I Can Come Up With a Sort Of Solution For The Both Of Us. Until Then Your Sleeping Up On The Other Outhouse across The Swamp",she told me. "Thank You Auntie Tia",I replied. "No Problem,And Dont Mention It. Seriously.. Dont Tell Anyone I Let you Stay here."
(Comment,Ill Add Up New Chapters Later) | |
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xDestinyx V.I.P
Posts : 2432 Join date : 2009-12-30 Age : 26 Location : Laying on the couch eating a Hamburger with America
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| Subject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:45 pm | |
| God Sister? o.o Wait what? | |
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CaptainMcSkull Platinum Poster
Posts : 3048 Join date : 2009-12-29 Age : 29 Location : Wherever the winds takes me
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| Subject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:19 am | |
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xDestinyx V.I.P
Posts : 2432 Join date : 2009-12-30 Age : 26 Location : Laying on the couch eating a Hamburger with America
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| Subject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:59 am | |
| First off, One,
I'd never let a person like you into my Mansion.
2. I'm not your God-Sister.
3. Hector hates you, I hate you, everyone hates you.
You're a horrible writer.
Fail. | |
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April Platinum Poster
Posts : 6250 Join date : 2009-12-30 Age : 27 Location : Home....
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| Subject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:06 am | |
| u forgot one Dest!
4. Your copying everyone who wrote pirate storys' ideas by writing another story based on family.
Geez. Make up your own, original story once in a while. | |
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FrenchFry Member
Posts : 5 Join date : 2010-08-11 Age : 29 Location : Portland, Maine
| Subject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Sat Sep 25, 2010 5:13 am | |
| Sorry, but that was pretty bad. I mean the writing, not the story idea, since I don't the family you come from. | |
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Cloud Super poster!
Posts : 199 Join date : 2010-07-07 Age : 30 Location : Florida dude:o
| Subject: Re: A Menace:The Story Of Lance Mcskull Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:27 pm | |
| You could at least give this kid a damn break, he's only what? 13? | |
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