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| Subject: Eyes of the Enchanted. Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:58 pm | |
| Okay..so I was thinking on writing a book Im gonna show u a small bit of chapter one, tell me what ya think? Thankys! ~~~Tris Moving. Chapter 1 [part 1]- Spoiler:
Her eyes were dark blue, with her long beautiful black hair, Her skin was pale as marble, Her name was Rhen Syni, her father and her mother, Galigin Syni, and Syintha Syni, Just movied to England, Her eyes were scanning the woodland area as the car was moving by on a dirt road, the car jerked to a stop, she stared up at her father and asked, "What is it?" Her father smiled and looked at her and answered, "Where here. Rhen." She smiled and got her bag of her books she always read, she got out of the car and stared up at the 4 story building, She smiled and looked at the beautiful trees, she took her bags out from the trunk and ran in, furinture was left due to the fact it was her grandmother's house. Rhen began searching around, Galigin sighed and looked at the ground, for his real name wasnt Galigin, nor was his last name Syni, his name was Zenthan, A Gaurdian Angel, The angel was exiled to earth to gaurd the child, Rhen, the Half angel and half humened child, Satan and his Demons already know about the girl, but their side of it, is to trick her into going with them to hell, to form her into a fellow half demoned girl.
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| Subject: Re: Eyes of the Enchanted. Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:01 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Eyes of the Enchanted. Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:33 am | |
| AWESOME CONTINUE!!! -claps- If u don't mind, tell me if I continue my story or not... | |
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| Subject: Re: Eyes of the Enchanted. Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:50 am | |
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