Cloud
Super poster!
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Join date : 2010-07-07
Age : 30
Location : Florida dude:o
 | | Subject: The Pickle Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:57 am | |
| Once upon a time there was a pickle. The pickle was never accepted by the other pickles in the pickle jar. Soon enough the pickle was chosen by the great hand of skin. Then pickle met Mr.Meat, Mr.Buns, and Miss.Ketchup.
Then the Pickle got eaten. BUT he NEVER died alone! He was eaten with his friends. He always feared being alone, and dying alone. But he died with his loved ones beside him.
I think there's a touching point to this story.
FIN | |
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CaitSith
Gold Poster
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Join date : 2010-02-04
Age : 27
Location : California dudes we're unforgettable :D
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| | Subject: Re: The Pickle Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:57 am | |
| BEAUTIFUL STORY. I CRIED DURING THE END. BRAVO. | |
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Aleera-Toy Maker
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Join date : 2010-03-01
Location : (points to Lane's Finger, which is pointing to Christa)
| | Subject: Re: The Pickle Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:03 am | |
| Oh my (wipes tear)
LOVE IT xD | |
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KingLaurent
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Age : 26
Location : Windy City
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| | Subject: Re: The Pickle Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:17 am | |
| -tear drops-
*claps*
That Was Very Beautiful! | |
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iChristina
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Join date : 2009-12-30
Age : 30
Location : Laughing City
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| | Subject: Re: The Pickle Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:36 am | |
| <3 YES YES YES  Send it to a publisher. | |
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