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 | Subject: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:19 pm | |
| Little Story About My life Critiques (Nice Ones) and Comments Are Excepted Chapter 1; The Flee of the Lost - Spoiler:
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It was a stormy day in the port of Port Royale, the townspeople were inside their homes safely guarded form the oncoming typhoon. A dark figure rode out into the streets with the Governor of the town calling after his Grand-daughter. "Destiny Turner! Get back here at once!" I ran across the cobblestone roads, the rain stinging my face like bullets. I had to go, Mother would never tell me where Father was, not all. The sandy blonde looked back, tears filling her eyes. "I'm sorry, Grandfather! I have to go!" I ran across to the dock and slipped into the mud with a groan. "Disgusting.." I was far from there, I just needed a ship. To travel on.. My eye instantly found one, a fishing boat. Great. Running onto the vessel, hearing the sounds of footsteps I ducked into a barrel. "Sir! There seems to be a woman on board!" A roughed handed man said, looking shocked. "Aye, well go look around and if you find her, take her to my Quarters. Understand?" The crew nodded and rushed off. My head popped out of the barrel, as I quickly ran off to find some disguises.
Chapter 2; Miss Sparrow - Spoiler:
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The fishing vessel ported into the Pirate town of Tortuga; where I would meet my best friend and be the First Mate under her charge later on. I walked out dodging bullets and drunken men trying to grab me. I had to say, Tortuga was pretty messed up at the time. Walking by the Tavern, I noticed a large line of sailors, not only young Men but Women! Getting curious, I casually walked in and stepped in line.
"And what's your story?" A red-headed girl asked the next person in line.
"Mine is that you let me join your crew, or you'll never see another light of day."
She nodded, as her eyes widened a bit. "Yes Maa'm, sign the Roster."
I was up next yet soon, so I thought it through my head as A blonde was sitting in the back staring at a compass and shaking it. "Cyan! How's things going? How many?" Cyan looked back at her Captain, with a little sigh. "So far, Liz, 4." Her blue eyes flashed open. "Four!? We have no time!" She seemed paniced as the woman rushed up and moved her. "Move, lass. I can do better." I stepped up in line as Elizabeth was busy writing. "And you, miss?" Exhaling, I started to speak. "My name is Destiny Turner, and the reason I need to join is to find my Father." There was a familiar look in her eyes. "
"Did you just say 'Turner'?"
I nodded. "Aye, why?" She shook her head. "Nothing, sign up Miss. You're accepted." I sighed with relief, and signed sitting down at a table. I was finally going to find my father....
Chapter 3; Out on Open Sea - Spoiler:
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The Captain suddenly stood up after awhile, "Cyan, time to go now." The red-head looked up. "Capn?" Elizabeth's blue eyes narrowed. "Now, or it's Davy Jones Locker for all of ya!" The crewmembers all suddenly stood up, racing out the doors to the Docks outside. I slowly stood up and walked casually, to Docks as Elizabeth and Cyan walked by my side. "Hurry up, Ms Turner! Step to!" I narrowed my hazel eyes and started running turning my head to see Elizabeth and Cyan walking and talking strangely looking at me.
"Elizabeth, why are you so enthusiastic about Turner?" Cyan asked puzzled. "She's just another crewmember, is all." Elizabeth laughed some, throwing her arm around her First Mate's shoulder. "Listen here, mate. This lass is the daughter of Will Turner and Elizabeth Turner." Cyan looked at Me, and back at Elizabeth. "The Pirate King's daughter...." She said with a sly smile, identical to her father's. "Elizabeth Turner's daughter says ye? I think I feel a change in the wind, says I." They both laughed, clinking their rum bottles together before drinking, I walked upon the ship, it was big. With massive sails as black as the night itself. I was amazed, How anyone could come upon Captaining a ship like this?? I jumped as The Captain came up the Gangway shouting orders. "Raise the Anchor! Cut the line! Release those sails! Out to open sea, you mangy curs!" I sat on a barrel as Elizabeth came over with a little disappointed look on her face. "That means you too, Ms. Turner!" She shouted, as I stumbled a bit racing off. "Yes Maa'm! I mean Captain!" Working hastilly, I released the sails and running to go release the anchor. Elizabeth walked up to the helm, smiling as she put her hands on the wheel. "Now I see why, Liz. Turner is basically her father. She may not look like it, but she definately acts like it. Don'tcha think?" Cyan said wiping sweat off her face from working.
"You catch on quick, Ms Gibbs."
She laughed. "I was always like that Ms. Sparrow..."
Soon the Black Pearl was out at sea, heading to wherever The Captain was planning to go.
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:50 pm | |
| Thanks Rose and Captain! If you don't really get it
Cyan= Gibb's Daughter (Reincarnation of Gibbs)
Elizabeth= Jack's Daughter (Reincarnation of Jack)
Destiny= Will Daughter (Reincarnation of Elizabeth)
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:26 pm | |
| Chapter 4- Sparrow's Secret - Spoiler:
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The Black Pearl was sailing across the waters as I noticed a the water was flowing in a river into a misty and damp forest. I looked up at Elizabeth, "Captain?" She looked down and started climbing into the row-boats with Me, Cyan, and some other two kids we picked up who were overboard; Len and Rin indentical twins except Len was the boy. Both Blonde haired and blue-eyed.
Everyone gotten into the rowboats as we slowly made our way down the Patanos River. I stared at the water vacantly as Cyan was talking about Elizabeth's adventures. "..Elizabeth had escaped from the Devil twice, without the 2nd time her Father aided her. She was almost dead by the time Davy Jones would've had her..." Len spoke up his blue-eyes glimmering. "The Kraken? How about that beast?" Cyan looked up as Elizabeth was staring ahead. "Elizabeth doesn't like the sound or mention of his name..." I looked up and called out. "Why's that?" Every single head turned to me, but the Captain only spoke. "The Kraken does Davy's bidding and takes those who are marked for their debts." Rin looked around. "They say, his breath is like a thousand rotting corpses!" "We're here, mates step to and mind the boat." Elizabeth said climbing up.
"Mind the Boat."
Cyan looked back "Mind the boat."
"Mind the Boat."
Rin climbed on up. "Mind the boat, Ms Turner!"
I looked around, seeing I was alone and sat down in the longboat with a sigh.
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:37 am | |
| Chapter 5- The Mystic Jasmine - Spoiler:
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The crew walked into the cabin, their eyes adjusting to the lowlight. Elizabeth lead the way and sat down at the table, putting her feet up. "Hey Jazz." She said with a mischievous smile. The curtains moved slightly as a woman as old as Elizabeth stepped out. She was a black, but her hair was tangled wearing a slightly torned dress. You would think it would get caught in the floorboards one day. The Mystic smiled, and walked slowly towards the table. "Elizabeth Sparrow... I am not surprised to see you." The blonde shrugged. "As am I, mate. You see I picked up a new crew." She sat down. "And a ship. Lizzie, you are just like your father. No doubt." Elizabeth looked offended, and crossed her arms. "Am not. I picked up a new crewmember too. Maybe your Mom knew her Father." Her eyes brightened. "Where is this 'crewmember' of yours?" The young Captain tilted her head towards the window. Jazz got up walking over and moved the curtains slightly, peering through directly out at the rowboat; at me. She scoffed and walked back but with a smile. "I see, your new crewmember. So who is her kin, Captain Sparrow?" Everyone leaned in whispering.
"The one and Only Elizabeth Turner is her Mother." "No way!?" Rin shouted. "The Pirate King never had any children!" Len exclaimed, but thought. "Did she?"
Elizabeth got in her position again. "Captain Turner retired and had a family with Master William."
Everyone stayed quiet as Jazz walked into her "lab" a crashing noise was heard and she walked out with a locket.
"A locket? Seriously, what is this for, Elizabeth?" Cyan said, enraged some.
Elizabeth only flashed a grin putting it around her neck. "Now we are done with our visit. Thank Ye, Jazz."
The Mystic nodded. "Here to help me friends. But this Turner girl has a great future ahead of her, Lizzie! You make sure she doesn't get hurt!" She called out, as the crew climbed down into the rowboat back to the Black Pearl.
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:56 am | |
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Tue Aug 03, 2010 6:25 am | |
| Chapter 6- Caught by The Devil, Fathers are found! - Spoiler:
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The Black Pearl was on the Seas for a long month, as time flew by we lost a couple of crewmembers. Rin and Len were reuntied with their parents in Singapore, don't know how blondes could end up there really.. Cyan Gibbs was murdered by some fishy type looking men. Me and Elizabeth tried to save her, no doubt we lost her to bloody fight and I was made First Mate. So only me, Elizabeth, and a boy we picked up who was Noble from England whow as on a piece of driftwood sailed through the black stormy night, waves tossing over the decks, knocking me and the new boy over and over again as Captain Lizzie tried to sail through the Hurricane. Tip of luck, never sail through Hurricanes. Our sea drifted out of the eye of the storm. yet it was raining and thundering like no tomorrow.
"Blow out the lamps! Now!" Elizabeth ordered as she tried to steady the wheel. I looked up and ran, blowing out the candlelight fast. The Black Pearl became pitch black in the Night, yet someone was watching from afar. "Bring her down. Down to the Ocean floor!" Aboard the Black Pearl, we sat in the Darkness holding our breath. I could hear my heart pound in my ears, as we heard a crashing of water and something come out of the sea. I could hear Elizabeth march down the steps, with a serious face on her. "It's alright Squid Face! It's nothing but me, eh?" The Captain looked over from his ghostly, barnacled ship. He had a crab claw and his face was covered in tentackles with his hand wrapped around his cane. I saw more fish-like characters as Elizabeth talked. "We know you have the Black Pearl for 10 years and your service is up, Elizabeth Sparr-a!" The blonde laughed like nothing mattered. "Technically, I only had it for 9 years because my father stole-" Davy grinned, a nasty smile creeping on his face. "Your father, Jack Sparrow." He smirked, his lips bubbling. "He will be delighted to see you." The confused Elizabeth looked around confused, "What do you me-" She was cut off seeing the shape of her father, coming out beside the Crustacian Captain. Just on que, the fishy sailors came out with their saws made form fish bones to me and the Noble's throats. Elizabeth winced seeing the sight of her father, what I know a long time from now, he would be my brother-in-law! "Hi Jack." She growled as Davy Jones and her father walked over. "My, what a surprise to see you, lass." He smirked back, his brown eyes blazing with hatred. I looked at him, He wore a black coat, with a vest and long shirt underneath with a ripped belt and a brown hat ontop of his head with a small red bandana peeking out. I raised my eyebrows curiously, he had dreadlocks that one part was tied. He smelt of dirt and rum, and I made a sickened face. "Ewww..." I murmerred out, The rouged Captain looked over at me, Davy Jones following his gaze. "And I haven't forgotten you.. Your father is over on the ship too. Mind as well go meet him over there." He taunted with a laugh, that made me break out of the Hammerhead shark man's grip. "How dare ye say that! My father would never end up with a Monster like you!" Jack looked at me. "Down lass." I growled, and looked at the Squid Captain. "Take me over there! Now!"
Davy only grinned, and put put his crabclaw around my neck sqeezing it, and I blacked out.
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Tue Aug 03, 2010 11:27 pm | |
| Chapter 7- Reunite and the Escape from Hell - Spoiler:
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I woke up on the cold ground, my neck stinging with pain as I held it. I took my hand off of it, feeling a cloth but seeing some splats of blood. "About time you woke up." I heard the muffled voice, I looked over to see a man standing infront of the cell. He wore a vest with a belt around his shoulders wearing a jacket. He had brown hair and a mustashe but clearly he had it in a ponytail. "Who are you?" I asked, my hazel eyes curious. "Will Turner, and you are?" I got up from my laying position and smiled. "Destiny Turner. You must be my Father." William smiled some, leaning down on his knees holding my hand through the bars. "How did you get all the way out here?" I kept smiling, with a shrug. "I had some help." My father looked at the stairway and back at me. "I'll get you out, and we'll escape. Aye?"
I nodded. "Aye, now get me out." I smiled as my father investigated the cell. He took a sharp piece of iron and broke the lock. "Keep down, Destiny. I'll make sure no one is awake." Looking after him, Will made a fast break up the stairs quietly and after awhile he came back. "Everything is set to go." We took off up the stairs, as I stepped over some of the fishy sailors. We started to lower the longboat down, some of the sailors coming awake. "Get in! Get in Destiny! I'm right behind ye!" I climbed in the boat and my Father cut the rope as we went splashing into the black sea. "Captain! Master Turner and Turner! They escaped!" Davy Jones marched up to the deck angrily, watching the boat disappear into the darkness. "It wouldn't be sense to follow them. We'll deal with them in time from now.." I cuddled against my Father as he rowed, tears stinging my cheeks. We drifted into the night, I could hear Elizabeth shouting from the Black Pearl as we passed. "Don't worry, Destiny! We'll meet again! I promise! I'll let nothing happen to you, mate!"
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:36 pm | |
| The Sparrow's Mourning-- Elizabeth Sparrow's Death - Spoiler:
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Me and my father luckily made it to England where my mother and grandfather were., I was greeted with open arms and some crying but, I had sailed all over the Caribbean! Were they not even mad? Well, now that I had to tell why I went, I didn't tell them people I had encounter with and met. SO, here I am walking on the streets of England all by me lone self until I started to hear shouting. I turned on Fleet Street, and saw the form of a man. He was pale and seemed to have brown eyes that cut through yours. He had black and white curled hair wearing a vest that was some splattered with blood. Theres atnd across form him, was Elizabeth Sparrow! My heart lept as I came running "Elizabeth!" The blonde turned her hea d"Destiny... get away!" She said pushing me. "But why?" "Ah, friendship.. It ne'er seems to last." He cackled. "Stay out this, Sweeney!" Elizabeth shouted, pulling her sword running at him. I thought in my head, shocked. 'Does she mean Sweeney Todd? The Demon Barber of Fleet Street!?' He raised his razor and cut past Elizabeth head, but she ducked as she heard it skin across her arm. "Damn it!" I heard her growl. SO, they clashed I was standing helplessly, wanting to help she was getting cut all over again blocking, then he'd make a cut. Sweeney evaded to the side and as she lunged towards him and I heard a blood-curdling scream. Elizabeth fell to the ground, bleeding form her arms and sides. Especially now from the side of her neck. "Elizabeth!" She looked up weakly, seeing her father watchign in the distance I turned to see him and barked. "You get over here! How dare you watch your daughter slowly die!" Jack slowly walke dover, but stayed in the darkness. I watched to see Sweeney, grinning. My eyes widened as he towered over, "Watch this, Jack Sparrow! The Final brave moments of your daughter!" He laughed insanely, and stabbed his razor into her throat, cutting away and blood splattering everywhere. He backed up once Elizabeth was gasping, blood flowin from her horrible wound. He walked away, wiping off his razors into the shadows.
"Elizabeth!" I cried through tears and rushed to her, kneeling by her. "Destiny..." She seem to say with a weak smile. "Tell my father...." She said, her eyes narrowing towards Jack, who stood in the darkness. Waiting for ehr, I looked at her. "I left a dagger with his blood on it...." SHe said finally atlast, before fading off and her whole body became cold. "Elizabeth...." I said, closing my eyes and putting my hands over her eyes and closed them and looked to Jack. "See what you've done?" I got up. "You watched your daughter and felt ntohing.. Good Job." I stayed with Elizabeth the whole night till my parents found me, with a search party. I explained everything and who elizabeth was. But I never mentioned Jack, who they already knew who he was. Walking away slowly, they put a bag over Elizabeth, a cloth one and carried her on a wagon away from where I was walking and I never saw her again...
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 | Subject: Re: Promised-- Destiny's Life Story Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:49 am | |
| Chapter 8-- Fog Bound and the Boy From the Sea (Crossing from England) - Spoiler:
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The HMS Dauntless mad eit through the foggy ocean of the Atlantic as we sailed from England. It was nearly a year since Elizabeth's Death and I almost forgot everything except for her. Walking up to the bow, I put my hand on the railing watching the water and sung some.. "We pillage, we plunder, we rifle and loot. Drink up me hearties yo ho! We kidnap and ravage and don't give a hoot. Drink up me hearties yo ho! Yo ho, yo ho a pirate's life for me. We extort, we pilfer, we filch and sack... Drink up… " Quickly startled, I looked up to see the form of Mr. Gibbs, looking up at him he barked. "Quiet missy! Cursed Pirates sail these waters.. You don't want to bring them down on us, do ya?" A strong voice ordered from behind him as Leuitenant Norrington made his way behind him "Mr Gibbs! That will do!" I took a sigh of relief to see him. "She was singing' about Pirates. It's bad luck to sing about them in with us mired in this unatural fog, mark my words." He warned, glaring at me as Norrington watched him. "Consider it marked, on your way." Gibbs nodded solemnly. "Aye Leuitenant, bad luck to have a woman onboard too.. Even a miniature one." I glared at him as he walked away taking a quick shot and came up beside Norrington. "I think it'd be exciting to meet a Pirate." He gave me a cold glance as he talked. "Think again, Miss Turner . Vile and dissolute creatures, the lot of them. I intend to see to it that any man who sails under a pirate flag or wears a pirate brand gets what he deserves – a short drop and a sudden stop." He said switching his gaze from the water to me. 'A short stop and sudden drop.. What does he mean?' I looked over to Mr Gibbs as he gave me the sign for a Hanging, I gasped and took a step back before backing up into my Mother. Glad she was there, she stopped him from going on! "Lieutenant Norrington, I appreciate your fervor, but I’m, uh, I’m concerned about the effect this subject will have upon my daughter." She said, looking down at me and back at him. My Grandfather and Father joined her as she stood behind me. "My apologies Mrs. Turner." Norrington said walking away, I exhaled and put my hand on my chest.
"But actually.." I said looking up. "I find it all fascinating."
"Yes.." My father answered. "That's what concerns us."
My family walked away and I looked over the side. Before blinking I saw a piece of wreckage and spotted a parasol in the water, but I never expected the other thing to be in it. "There's a boy!" I yelled, looking around and back at him over the side. "There's a boy in the water!" before I even knew it, everyone looked over the side as Norrington agve orders. "Man overboard! Man the ropes! Fetch a hook and haul him aboard!" I watche dintently, before they brought him up, and Norrington looked at him "Good, he's still breathing." The smell of burnt wood and gunpowder filled the nostrils of the crew as shocked Mr Gibbs spotted wreckage of a merchant ship. "Mary, Mother of God!" He said in disbelief. My Grandfather gasped, his mouth gaped. "What happen here!?" Norrington looked at everyone. "It's most likely the powder magazine, they run heavily armed."
Gibbs looked at the wreckage still and back at us. "It did a good lot. Everyone's thinking it. I'm just sayin' it. Pirates."
My eyes widened as my parents looked worried and Norrington sent out a search party in the bolats, my Grandfather came over to me. "The boy's in your charge, Destiny. Take care of him."
"yes Grandfather" I said before, kneeling down moving some of his hair out of his eyes. He gasped awake, shocked and clutched my wrist tightly. "It's alright.." I said trying to calm him. "I'm Destiny Turner..."
"J-Jones Sparrow.." He said, trying to talk.
"I'll take care of you, Jones.. Alright?"
He tried to smile but passed out again, I noticed something bright and mettalic like around his neck. I slowly picked up examining it and found out... "Y-You're a Pirate..." Norrington came over "Have you found anything out?" I quickly hid the medallion.
"Just his name sir.. Jones Sparrow.."
"Take him below men."
I watched Jones disappear iunder the deck, as I held the medallion in my hands returning to the bow. I looked up, seeing the ghastly figure of a black Pirate ship sailing away quickly.
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