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PostSubject: Just a poem I wrote..I was in the mood so yeah..   Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:50 am

She stared at him,
She couldn't help herself at all,
For what could she do?
Her love for him was strong.
But she didn't know what to do.
Everytime she saw him,
She thought of something,
That she never did do.
She stared in the mirror for hours,
Thinking what she could do,
She was either to Fat,
Or to skinny,
To skimpy,
Or she thought she just wasn't pretty enough.
She stopped eating,
Stop putting on make up,
And always messed with her hair,
But for she was fine the way she was,
But does she know that?
No was the answer to that.
She was told he moved away,
Her eyes widened and she ran to her friend,
Just for some play..
She noticed him standing right next to him,
Her friend had lied to her,
They had fun,
Talked,
Took pictures and had fun,
But the fun ended when her crush had something bad to say,
He was moving,
Away from her,
Away from everything,
She walked home after that,
Her eyes filled with tears.
She now regrets for not saying anything
And not doing anything..
Foolish girl..
~TVI [my ignitals..]
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PostSubject: Re: Just a poem I wrote..I was in the mood so yeah..   Thu Jul 08, 2010 11:09 am

There's a great depth to this one, it's really blunt and honest. Easy to relate too, and it illistrates the term, "second guess".
I personally love it, and I can honestly relate.
Not to mention I know what it's about.:/
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PostSubject: Re: Just a poem I wrote..I was in the mood so yeah..   Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:28 pm

>.>'...Lol..thanks i gues :3.. Embarassed @.@" i normally make poems on the way i feel dat day
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